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Kaguyalover
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PostSubject: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 12:43 pm

edit: see latest post

Kaguyalover wrote:
Okay, this one should look a bit better?

Gorgyn Tainting
Straight from Greek mythology the Gorgyn, a terrible creature. An immortal one birthed by the Greek gods Phorcy and Sister Keto living off to the far western ocean. Though to date their current whereabouts are unknown, but still legends speak of them as men die by their hands. A spawn born of incest and let loose upon the world.

Gorgyn Xformation
This Xformation changes quite a bit of the user. Their hair transforms into new locks but not of hair, but of living venomous snakes, which upon will can change into 'appearing' like regular hair. Wing's of gold would protrude out from their backs, obtaining adamantine claws, and their skin smoothen out to what is the skin of a serpent. Their teeth changes as well to that of serpent fangs and their blood changes as well, but the most important of all their gaze changes as well as legend foretells that the gaze of a Gorgyn can change though who look upon it to stone. But like everything else in Greek mythology, they were a very powerful creature, with quite the intellect and strength to match.
The Changes:
1. Living venomous snake hair [can extend hair to at least double it's original length]
2. Wings of Gold
3. Adamantine Claws
4. Serpent Skin
5. Serpent Fangs [can inject blood with these, or spit out blood with these]
6. Gorgyn's Blood
7. Stone turning gaze
Effect: +2 to attributes + Abnormally high intellect
Side note: Xformation can be trained so that the user can make their appearance look like a regular human.

Gorgyn Blood
Of legend it is said that depending upon the side to which the blood of the Gorgyn is drawn from acquires different affects. From the left side a instantly fatal poison, and from the right side of the Gorgyn it's been said that the healing properties of the Gorgyn's right side can even bring back the dead.
Effect:
Left side: instantly fatal poison [Dependent upon it's level is the effect of it's deadliness to the person being injected.
]
Right side: Miracle healing blood, can bring back the dead, Can cure poison of the blood from the left side.

Gorgyn's Gaze
With a gaze so terrible legend speaks that it can turn anything that gazes upon it to stone. Making the user's very own sight their own worst enemy as it can turn anything they see to stone, even themselves unless learned how to keep it under control. From first obtaining it the user holds no control over what turns to stone or not, but as control is gained the user is able to see without the need of turning others to stone.
Effect: Turns those within it's gaze to stone, depending upon the attributes of those hit with this gaze would rate the speed to which they turn to stone.

Side Note: As the technique is trained the user can hold back the effects of turning those within their sight to stone and even reverse stoning effects.
Side Note2: Effects of Stone wear off depending upon attributes
Weak: five post
Average: four post
Strong: three post
Ascended: two post
Supreme: one post

Gorgyn's Curse
According to legends these creatures were born of a incestuous love and thus their parents were that of a god and a sea monster to which the god lineage passed onto them and they acquired immortality. Living to roam the world forever, never to be loved for fear that there gaze would turn the one they love to stone and only accompanying one another.
Effect: Immortality, Can still move if health is dropped to 0 if dropped past zero to the negative of their maximum health gauge then they 'die' only to revive within six days time. For every level mastered a day is taken off of the wait time.

Gorgyn's Hair
The hair of the Gorgyn is apart of itself as it's own beating heart, thus they are able to control the snakes, which is their hair, at their own will. The Snayke's hold the same abilities as the head so they so, aside from their dangerously venomous venom hold the ability to turn others to stone. The user can even fire out the Snayke's as though they were projectiles, as once fired the Snayke can return on it's own or a new Snayke regrows in it's place.
Effect: Control over the hair of the user. Can be fired out like projectiles [fires out like a gun], Snayke holds a dangerously venomous bite and can stone upon gazing.


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PostSubject: Re: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 1:09 pm

sounds more like an NPC quest boss..
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Kaguyalover
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PostSubject: Re: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 1:23 pm

lol....scarey thing is this has been researched for a few days....and those weren't made up.....
Edit: Meaning those were the actual abilities of gorgon's from greek mythology..
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PostSubject: Re: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 1:27 pm

I know that, which is why I am pretty sure that it will be knocked as an npc boss or something for a quest.. those abilities are enough to take down the saga npcs without much problem, especially if a spirit were to use it.
on a side note, I would love to take a crack at one of these..
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PostSubject: Re: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 1:40 pm

Well I guess I could add a bit more detail to them making them more specific and more umm dealable? I guess is a way of putting it, making them seem less impossible to beat?
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PostSubject: Re: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 3:51 pm

Anti, stop posting ooc comments on staff boards.
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PostSubject: Re: Admin Review Clutter   Admin Review Clutter EmptySat Jul 10, 2010 11:42 pm

Kaguya, I'll save Shin some time...

Xformation: You'll only get one attribute boost and a +2 is highly unlikely. Also, you will need to limit the number of things that this xformation grants too or puts them into a more "site-friendly" setup b/c it's too long as it is. What do all of those things provide? Other question would be, what is "abnormally high intellect" in site terms b/c if a "not so bright" person were to make one of these, I'm not gonna pretend that some gibberish that they wrote was something brilliant.

Blood: 1) It's two abilities. 2) Anything "instantly fatal" is gonna be a problem. 3) The revive thing could work tho there's an ability that already does that and anyone can get it.
Gaze: How easy is it to break the stone b/c if you can basically turn them to stone and smash them into pieces with one strike, that'll be a problem b/c it's basically another auto-kill.
Curse: So basically if you have defense package at Perfected... instead of having 200 Health, you now have 400 Health and even if someone inflicts 400 dmg to you, you just revive in a day. This is like the Vaspire ability on crack.
Hair: It seems like the Familiar ability from Energy + poison + paralysis + projectile that returns or regrows AND it moves at Ascended rate.

All in all, Shin is gonna nerf the hell out of this or flat out deny it. To not clutter up the board, don't respond to this, it's just me trying to spare someone from the headache I go thru whenever I have to propose something. Shin will be responding on Monday, so you've got time to tweak this to put it on par with existing taints/soullines and I'm pretty positive that this will be a Soulline, not a taint. Oh and if you're gonna go for the whole turn people to stone thing, you're gonna need to set up what exactly that does.
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